Reviews for Chrono Break

[SomethingRandom]

Ill review this as i watch it

First thing, skip button in case people hate opening credits
Secondly, if you can, use diagonal moving sprites instea dof using that jagged sudden turn thing.
Another thing, i changed the fridge note to "Your fathers secretly gay", dunno why but i did, guess i was bored ^^
Use semi transparent text boxes for text, perhaps chuck in a picture of the character thats talking. make text boxes the size of the text, no bigger.
Thats all for me,. Other than what i said it was good, cant wait for another!

Mystic-Skye responds:

k thank!

[Spritegenius]

lol

Went to the store brb.

Mystic-Skye responds:

oh yeh his mother is hip! she aint old school she know da words lol!

[j00bie]

Well...

I was looking forward to the special features after seeing the movie, but the buttons didn't seem to work it all. Heh.

Anyway, you kind of ruined that song. How did you manage to do that one? It sounds like garbage. I know I wasn't supposed to remind you but I did anyway.

The sprites weren't used too well. They walk fine but Chrono and Lucca look like they've been in a waffle iron or something. The plot's too slow. Better luck next time.

Mystic-Skye responds:

hmph well didnt to jus go to fast for people who are slow readers or learners!

[Chosenofnature]

preview.

Before you submit your flash animations, you should watch them to make sure they work 100% correctly. Im not one to talk, but at least people can read what i have to say in my animation.

In most of the word bubbles, youd only read one line, and it would cut the rest off, that would be the first thing to work on.

the second, i know you dont want to hear it, is the sound. Sound is a major part of what makes an animation good, if the sound is bad, chances are the animation will get a bad rating. I know you couldent help it, but maybe try a different way of putting the sound in?

third was the actual animation itself. It was a little choppy, to be bland. Once again, i know mine wasent perfect, but it should be a little cleaner for a better animation. Some scenes chrono looks like he got out of a car smasher. I know it takes a long time, but the more effort the animation has, the better it will be overall.

I think you had a real good idea, it just needs to be worked on. Keep it up bro.

Mystic-Skye responds:

IIGHT THEN!

[mlake6]

Ok, a few points

What was with the crystals?
Its called dream stone, and how would they find it in 600AD?
It was only available in prehistoric times, but other than that it was ok.