Reviews for Blue (fbf #2)

[Bezman]

Stream your audio!

as with purple.

Anyway, this is far better than 'purple'.

I prefer purple as a colour (it's my favourite in fact) but liked the fact that this actually had something of a story.

The start with the ball landing down was a bit strange, but I liked the flattening against the wall, the splitting up, the axe and just about everything afterwards.

Your speed lines worked fairly well and the whole joke, though old, was nicely presented.

Very nice work.

As with the others though, some extra colours, highlights and shadows would be even nicer. Well, good luck with future fbfs.

Stay funky,
Bez

[Satoshiji]

Meh.

Too many of these stupid "FBF" animations floating about. The whole PLOT of this damn thing is ripped off from a GIF animation, where a stick figure tries desperately to open a door but the answer was so simple the entire time.. -_- What a bummer. I was hoping to see some quality FBF here, but some of it wasn't even FBF.. (Example: The door) The effects left a LOT to be desired.. there wasn't much fluidness to it.. I suppose the tutorial will give n00bs basic information on how to animate, but really, you shouldn't give tutorials on this sort of thing. If a person can use Flash, then they can do this.

(/) U

[Das-Elsbernd]

aweseome

good job thanks for the tutorial im going to start fbf.

[Maxwell-FA]

WooWoo!

You rule!

[aznph8playa]

Not bad...

Clearly plot is not your forte ;) You seem to have attempted to make a plot and fallen flat on your face. I think purple was a bit more fun ^_^ It's randomness was right on the mark. Also there wasn't so much crazy action with amazing pictures. These pictures seemed a little dull. If you make, say green... I would recommend trying to either think through with a plot or just doing something as random as purple and sticking some really interesting pictures into it.

jmtb02 responds:

I think Ill make the next color green, because its my favorite color, but either way, youre right when you say that the graphics were not as pretty. However, I think that what this one had that purple didnt was better animation. Purple was flawed in many ways, and it had many things I really wanted to fix. This one, however, the animation ran the way I wanted it to. But anyway, thanks for the review. Ill either work on my plot or have no plot at all, haha.
--jmtb02