chill a bit man
first off, youll never get anywhere talking to "would be fans" like that. all it does is really show a level of immaturity which i suppose is common on newgrounds, but you really dont have to add to it.
secondly, your flash isnt THAT bad. i dont care for the subject matter or even get it, but some of the ideas you had for cinematic angles or shots were pretty decent.
the artistic design couldve been better, but its better than anything i can draw, so all i can say is keep working on it.
not bad...but get a story with it so it makes us want to pay attention, just dont loop the same sequence over and over. unless its funny, which i hope to god this wasnt intended on being...