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Reviews for "[LK] Lost (WiP)"

1 thing that stands out for me....

the fact that you completely ignored the restraints of bars, beats and such. I think it contributed well to the overall feeling of the piece. I have a feeling that you didn't, but I definitely can't capture the beat, so you did well at concealing it.
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The emotion conveyed by this song is amazing. It's peaceful, feels safe, tranquil. I don't know if that's the theme you were aiming for though, as you called your song lost. However, that's the theme you got. And the buildup towards the end resembles two loved ones finding each other.
Not much wrong with the song, I just think that the guitar at the end it a little too loud, considering that all the instruments are at full swing.

LK412 responds:

I didn't completely ignore it but i did put some notes off on purpose. And yea i have a tendency not to master my songs so yea the guitar was to loud. Thats the theme i was going for but i couldnt think of a name so i called it that. Thanks for the review. i noticed you didnt rate it. lol.

nice

lol at the dude below me who 'can't capture the beat'. the track is pretty nice, sound quality is cool too. 5/5

LK412 responds:

Thanks a lot it really means a lot.

Nice.

You oughta mess with the volume a little, there are some instruments that are more prominent than they need to be.

Certainly an improvement.

The song is certainly an improvement from the last time I checked on your songs. It's nice to see that you're making good progress.
Let's see. It's a nice tune. The main problem I have with the song is the piano. The guitar also sounds weird, but to me my focus is the piano. It is similar to a piano, but it's way too synthesized to sound acoustic. I'd recommend using a different VSTi.
I'd like to hear the finished product.

-HFX ^_^

LK412 responds:

Thanks for the review and the compliment. Could you recommend any VSti's? That would be awesome. Also the guitar does the melopdy sound wierd or the sound of it? Im not sure about both. Thanks for the review again.