hmm
well first the voices need to be clearer the volume of the kids first was too low also the sound of the mother is a short loop if u got longer material that would be great
the animation the people looks good no comment there but the house looked well kinda square try make it smoother
but.... as this is your first movie and iam sure i could not do any better by a long shot in my first submission ,this is i well done peice be proud :)