Great work Rob
My partner =) lol makes me so happy to see your work done good lol im j/k i suck at this crap hes helping me and i help him...well anyways nice job rob
Great work Rob
My partner =) lol makes me so happy to see your work done good lol im j/k i suck at this crap hes helping me and i help him...well anyways nice job rob
Thanks Jared
Great Work!
i loved it i have never seen the first one but i am wtching it as i speak. i did have one prob the music try to make the songs flow together more. besides that Great Work!
thank you
nyeh...
well, a 14 yr. old making a mature rated animation.. thats kinda like a 12 yr. old making porn, do you send him to jail if he looks at it? -.- anyhow, it was pretty cool, but you just couldnt keep me interesting.. so the plot needed some work.
Lol i know what you mean but might i say considering that you are ten years older than me you have not realized how much more sofisticated...in terms of violence immunity...us "kids" are. Anyway the plot unfolds in part three.
Very similar to the recently submitted "Klesh."
But I like both. The voice acting wasn't too fitting, though. I think in this kind of thing it's just best to leave out the story... senseless violence is all that's needed. Good job, keep at it.
Klesh was way worse than mine...and i havent even watched it before. Lol and i know my voices sucked. In the first one i kept getting reviews saying "Put it voices!!" so i did and it sucked lol part three has less talking and stuff.
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Well, I was pretty impressed at that. At first I was thinking, fuck that, those blobs are basically one step up from stickmen. Then I realised it was actually very well drawn and animated. The only things I didn't like were the plotline, because I couldn't follow it, and the soundtrack, but then thats more of an opinion. I think with your drawing skills, you should more effort into drawing proper characters though. Good effort...
3/5
Thanks for the advice. Ill keep that in mind with this other cartoon i am working on. the characters look ok.