Not Bad
Well, the Animation could be a little less stiff, and the killing could be a little bit more realistic. Also the Zelda drawing might need a little work, but that's all the negative things I have to say.
The Story Idea was great, the Link Drawing was impecable and the music you put in rocked and fit in perfectly with the video.
You are a worthy Flash animator. Keep up the good work
awesome
they need to make a tv show out of this ! that and the other her. rage things were awesome but just to say at the beginning links hands looked like his feet LOL but still it rocks and i like this better than the zelda games!
Again, as one of the greatest Zelda fans alive, I have to admit this was an amazing movie. I'm afraid there's lots of improvements I can suggest, and I pray for your forgiveness here, I loved the movie itself but there's alot that could have made it better.
-The intro... well you made it seem like you were trying too hard. You don't need devastating words to make an effect of terror.
-When the knight of Hyrule was speaking the lip sync was really out.
-Zelda was obviously pregnant but it was very much exaggerated, or that's one huge baby. Her lips were rather bloated as well.
-There's no way all the knights he killed were hundreds.
-Sometimes Link's sword disappeared when he was dodging and things. You might want to have put it in the sheathe on his back if he's not going to use it. The same deal with his quiver, bow and longshot.
-Arrows don't make people explode lol. Maybe if it was the Light Arrow, but a normal arrow doesn't tear through people and make them fall apart.
-For the record, Link is left handed =P
-People don't really fall apart when you swing a sword at them. The deaths were all pretty similar, the interesting thing was how he killed them.
-At the end scene, Link and Zelda's eyes were absolutely huge.
-In the credits, you didn't mention using the Song of Time for the intro.
-The music just cut off from the battle scene, you might have wanted to time it to fade out at a certain point in the song, or choose different music altogether. Generally songs with lyrics aren't all that effective because when the scene is over you have to cut off the words in mid-sentence, like you did. You might want to look for another song if you have the patience.
I'd just like to add here, you did amazingly well drawing the skull-faced leader of Ganon's army, that was really awesome animation. Just when he turned into a spider... I had no idea that was a spider until he shot the web. I honestly don't mean any offence, but it looked like a huge black blob, you should try to define features(abdomen, legs, whatever you could) more clearly in the future.
The graphics themselves weren't all that special, but for such a long movie with smooth animation, camera styles/angles and a generally kick-ass plot, it didn't really matter all that much. You've done really well in making this, make no mistake about that, but I just thought I'd give you as much constructive criticism as I could. You're really a true Zelda fan for making such amazing tributes, my personal thanks to you for that Scott.
And little Link made me smile =)
~VelvetDarkRocks~
GREAT!!!!!!!
I don't care what those other guys say, this flash rocked. That';s how it got on in the first place. Make alot more. Also very good taste in music.
DUDE READ THIS
I dont care how lame ppl say your movies are i and alot of other ppl think they r awsome so dont quit just keep making this series i think it ROCKS DUDE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!