Nice try...
Nice try, but there are a couple of MAJOR problems with this.
- The music synching is waaay off, and it's full of gaps and odd buzzes. o_O
- Now this is only my opinion, but a good music video shouldn't be as overwhelmingly literal as yours is. Don't follow the words exactly, make visuals that more suit the feel of the song. The coke in a shoe was a start, but you need to do more. Much more.
The Flash artist Drew Mokris has done an amazing music video of this song, I think you should check it out for inspiration. His site is at... er... hmm, the review submission page seems not to allow me to post the URL, even though it says "no promotion of UNRELATED websites"... o_O Well, just search Google for "spinnerdisc".
Good luck on future productions.
-fs