Average
Nothing great, cos most of the stuff didnt fit on the screen, and it wasnt amazingly funny, but not too bad.
Reviews for "Patrick 1 - Game"
Pretty good
I liked the humour, the animation and the voices, the only thing that let it down is that not everything fitted in the screen (which I guess you already knew). Sort that out and resubmit and it'll do better.
slightly humourous
a nice attempt at being funny, but the pace was a little slow. the screen angles were awkward and didn't fit everything. seems like you could have something going here, work on it!
screen size was way off
decent graphics, but the words didn't fit on the screen
don't be meanie.
i'm so sick of people who are so negative towards EVERYTHING. it's as if authors like you make flash movies purely to entertain them, whilst they sit on their throne (computer chair) and throw blams left right and center.
personally, i found this flash funny. just because its not front page material, doesn't mean its blam worthy. i thought it was great, and you should definately keep it up.
just one thing, when "patrick" was listing the potential things in his bag, you couldn't read the words, only half of them, as though it was zoomed in too far. just a little pointer. otherwise - great work. 4/4 6/10.