Rough
It had characters and potentiall chance, the only reason for the low scores is because my immediate thought after viewing it was "Is that it?!?"
I don't mean to be rude with the overall writeup but if you are going to submit something give it a little bit more of a reason for existance than what this animation was about. (I know that sounds bad from someone that hasn't released an animation however in this case it's justified).
Don't be disheartened just give it another go with and fingers crossed next time I can give you the review you deserve.