meh.
it was pretty crappy, art was OK, but everything else sucked.
i don't think this deserves 3.50/5.00
oh well, im sure you can do alot better.
meh.
it was pretty crappy, art was OK, but everything else sucked.
i don't think this deserves 3.50/5.00
oh well, im sure you can do alot better.
Pretty good, it was worth a laugh or four.
I liked it, the drawing was great, I loved the style. The animation worked, but I could have done with some more fluidity. As a fellow animator though, I know how annoying it is to draw such a detailed drawing over and over to achieve just a little movement, so I can't really complain-- at least it didn't look like crap :)
The only thing I can reccomend to you is to change the sounds a bit. I didn't like the footsteps, and I don't think ALL of them were neccesary (The smile noise wasn't really neccesary but I laughed-- The blinking just wasn't neccesary though, for instance).
However, I loved the style of it in general, it's a lovely short that reminds me of a commercial for... Well, I don't know what, but that's sort of the feeling I got.
Keep it up, the next one could make the front page!
Now THAT's a review! See people?!? Point out what you liked and/or disliked and say WHY, and maybe, just maybe, newgrounds.com won't be so full of crap!
Thank you JaggedG!
mmmmm k
that was nice...make em fuck in pt.2...but I can't see that getting blammed,outta be a classic
So THAT'S what I've been doin wrong
Tip #1 is especially helpful.
uh....it was ok
this submission made me think of this chick named Jessica i tried to pick up this weekend, wat a bitch!