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Try to work on the dialogue, its kinda dry...and not right... like at the begining when tails and yoshi get trapped by the spikes, then tails says something like "Not only are we trapped, but our lives are in danger"
didn't seem to fit in a situation where they were about to die.
Quite good...
I'm not a 'hater' i'm just going to give a fair and balanced review, in my opinion:
The first thing I'd like to comment on is your use of grammar and spelling. I'm not sure whether english is your first language or not, so im not sure whether your mistakes are a result of your lack of understanding of the language or just poor checking. One confusion you had was with words like: where and were and such.
Another problem is with your scrolling backgrounds, they didn't seem very smooth and quite jumpy.
And of course, try and have more action and less text, its not very interesting to watch sprites stand with text bubbles going off for 2 minutes.
On the good side of the movie!
The sound was great, very organised and fitting with the action.
The sprites moved smoothly and were varied enough in their actions.
I also liked your plot and direction of the whole thing, it seems very promising.
Please don't accuse me of being a hater, im just trying to help you understand your faults so that you can correct them, so that really it is for your benefit.
Well done, honestly.
This is a great series, a good selection of audio,sprites and backgrounds. The story energetic and entrawling. Take your time with 7, however I couldn't get the preview to work. Any help? Nice work, definitely great. 4 for you.
sry about that i decided to wait on the preview and I will make a trailor instead
Hmmm...
Yeah, this is good. But the fighting doesn't seem as good as it used to be, and if Sigma killed Sonic, how come Zero says he felt really guilty about it? And what does Tails mean when he says "We'll go to war soon?" Shouldn't he revive Sonic first?
Whoa...
Lotsa stuff going on in this episode!
Heh, you even got Boom-booms in this one. =P
Uhm... OK, so Ciel shows up exactly at the moment Zero was thinking of her? Well, that's a... coincidence. o_O
...So it was Sigma all along... Man. That really baffles me, with the misplaced feelings of anger toward Zero and all.
Such a plot twist.
Heh, another feeling of DejaVu in the Megaman and Zero sequence... =P
...And spell "Chaos" right for once! XD
Well, again, great job. On to the next one!