Decent
It had a solid concept, excellent text and action speed, and the dialogue was very good.
The only constructive criticism I can think to offer is to have a menu that gives the option of scene selection.
Reviews for "Kingdom Sprites: Episode1"
silencer169 responds:
Thank you for the review Venom, I'm truly glad that you liked it.
I agree with you on the Menu, It will be one of my endeavors in the next episode. Once again, Thank you.
-silencer169
Not bad
A good attempt for your first animation. The story is compelling and there is plenty of action. But the boxless, brightly-colored text was hard to read most of the time and sometimes just impossible. Maybe a set background against the text would make it easier to read. Also, the text goes by pretty quickly, which makes a bad partner with rough coloring and placement. Otherwise, it has potential.
silencer169 responds:
TRULY.....
I apologize for the stress i put on your eyes while attempting to read my submission...It won't be a problem in the next episode, trust me...
-silencer169
cool
i think this was really original. you broke some new ground (hehe) with it. you could have done more with link's intro though.
silencer169 responds:
Yes I could have but I new that there was going to plenty of action later and didn't want to start wasting space in the intro...
lol!!! new...ground!!!! lol
NICE...
thanks for the review!
sorry I took a while to respond
I haven't been in newgrounds in about one month and a half...
-silencer169
Sweet!
That was sweet! Nice Sprite Movie, but where was Megaman :( I hope he'll be on time in the next Episode. Keep up the good work!
silencer169 responds:
Turn the :( in to a :)
The Blue Bomber will be on time in the next flick. I want to do Mega-Man some ass kicking justice...no Sigma included though.....so don't even...
-silencer169
A nice beginning
This seems like a good start. I'll be waiting for future entries. The one area that didn't sit well with me was the floating text -- it just feels cheap. A simple line between the text and the speaker would help, I think. Word balloons would really help the movie, stylistically. Oh, and the Blue Falcon can't fly (for that, Captain Falcon has a spaceship, the Falcon Flyer), but I guess it's too late to change that now.
Good luck in your work!
silencer169 responds:
Yes I am well aware of the fact that the Falcon Flyer is Captain F's Main ship, however, I needed more than one ship....I forgot to mention that they modified the racers with "Gummy" technology.... I will mention it in the next entry....
sorry for the lack of realism and respect F-Zero's storyline.
Thanks for taking the time to write.
-silencer169