good
i liked the first time round...glad to see ya have an edited version...still some stuff could use somework... i think this should pass though...i dont know.. if it doesnt then i would add in episode two with it...and with ep 2 either wrap it up or leave an opening for ep 3....thats all the advise i can give you...good luck with your animating...the postiton of flash God is waiting.....will you be the one to take it?....lol. keep up the good work
hahaha
hahahah its like a barney cartoon cept someone shoots his fucking head off, hah this is great
Random
Random but good, loved the style of drawing. Try and sync sounds better...
oh my god
its like hes actually talking to me! sad thing is that i responded.
interesting character, i thought it was a good movie.
--jmtb02
Not bad
Graphics were good, your sounds had too back background sound to them. Meaning that the microphone was picking up some air or something. To fix it I have 3 suggestions for you
1) Get a mic with one of those black fuzzies on it.
2) Go into a sleeping bag with the mic and record the noises in there, this will null alot of the background sound when you're on a tight budget
3) Record the sounds in the closet. The clothes will help null some of the sounds from outside.
If you're really ambitious, you can do all three and the sound should come out pretty clear as long as you don't breath into the microphone. Hope this helps