cant belive those zero bombers .
wow, dude this is seriously like beautiful, i LOVE the melody, the "yeah" vocal should be brought up/down a octave to fit with the higher melody of the song.
but dude take that melody, and make it into a trance/ techno / dance song, i think it'd do much better as one of those rather then a hip hop song, but still great.
add lyrics....like seriously, this could turn into something literally awesome....i can see this song getting famous if it only had lyrics.
but the main melody does get a little repetitive, try changing it up a bit once in a while.
well done though, very well done =]
-AriA
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