Alright, here's the deal...
Okay, I'm going to be completely honest with you, and don't trash me for my honesty. I gave you some extra points for style since you DID take the time and effort to make a new entry, and did it pixel-by-pixel. It is because of this, however, that you lost points elsewhere. It is not necessary to draw a flash movie pixel-by-pixel, and as it turns out, the movie looked very "untidy" or sketchy. The movie took time, obviously, but it just fails to amaze or interest in any way. Had you expanded and used more efficient methods of making the movie, this might have been great. Keep trying, though.