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Reviews for "Mana Realm Chapter 1"

hmm

nice.. but need sounds and make it just that the ppl dun blink together.. -.-

gd animation looking forward for the nxt one

lwksdnfodbn

I dunno dude
Im drunk
Its good i guess
from what I remember!@

got bored reading

if you can record the intro to a better wave file, instead of a scrolling text, more viewers will definitely wait and watch.

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That was some good work. But you really need to have some sound/music at the beginning, and also break up the intro text into paragraphs. Props.

This has some great potential

Its a great job so far but it really does need music, and i tryed to gauge my opinion with the fact that the final version will. I can't wait to see it when its done. Now for the constructive criticism, are you ready? good. For starters the speed really needs to be changed, i thought the battle was way to slow, a battle like that would be over reletivly quickly, not done slowly like that, that reminded me of a slow paced game of final fantasy, where you wait for eatch side to attack. while i also thought the text was too fast in most cases. The i had to read fast on the intro with the scrolling text, a little too fast. And the graphics need some touchups, the zoomed out views of the armys are rather strange, and how they all had there blink synced up (but i know that would be hard to change). I do like the charactor models though, they are throughly enjoyable, scenery could use some more work but i also understand how tiem consuming redrawing it detailed is. The monsters are neat, and the arrow volleys, i liked that. Im curious to find out why there fighting the monsters.

Wow, i wrote alot, hope thats not too much.
Just one last question, what FPS is that? and how long have you spent so far?