It was ok
It was a little slow but I still liked it
Reviews for "1984- Average Morning"
Well...
It seemed like it was being dragged on abd on. The music didn't help.
Errrr...
DON'T LOOP ANNOYING MUSIC! I didn't want to hear that musical riff once let alone the hundreds of times you had it looped. Did you even have any sound effects other than the music? Would have helped, a lot.
Okay, you've got a lot of things from 1984 right in there, the party buildings being pyramids, etc...
But smiley faces on the telescreen? Newspeak being given explanatory english phrases in brackets? The incredibly bland 2 minutes of hate?
This needs some more work, not so much on the technical details but just on the nuances of the film.
packow responds:
I didnt attemp newspeak. I thought it would be to comlicated for people who hadnt read the book to comprehend. The telescreen images were ment to look deceiving.
Hmm...
It's an interesting style... I thought some of the character animations look stupid though. It's not that bad... But that music got annoying really fast.
I'd make this into a series, but you need to make it funnier. The only thing I found funny was the 2 minutes of hate. Overall I think this could progress into a better series...
Pretty good...
I liked how it was done in black and white with the grainy reel effect. What did you get on the project?
packow responds:
I dont know yet im presenting it tommorow :D