Pretty good!
Im looking forward to the next version of this.Add lots of more stuff and some music too,keep up the good work!
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Reviews for "The Chibi-Machine v0.44"
Xenosteel responds:
hmm I think this can be a good project to work on, will make my drawing better if I practice on this one :P
thanks!
a face dress up is original, just needs more dtail
A nice and different idea of a dress-up game which concentrates on only the morecomplex features of the face rather than everything in general. I liked your anime style of drawing the cartoon faces they looked really professional especially the classical japenese big square eyes, they were spot on :) Only problems with this is that:
1) It doesnt have sound, try putting in a little musical background and sound effects.
2) No animations are here at all - try putting some animations when you click certain things. An idea is that you could make the person you have created speak by clicking their mouth at the end.
3)There isnt much interactivity as there is only 4 options to choose from and those aren't very complex eitehr. Add more options like make up and maybe tatoos on the face or nose or ear piercing, and make more hair styles and faces to choose from. Perhaps you could have different accessories that add up to different personalities? Like a nerd with classes ect and punks and hippies, which speak in different ways when you click on their mouths. Just an idea here to help you.
All in all an average game its original but it just needs a bit mroe detail. Once again hope you found this helpful and good luck :)
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Xenosteel responds:
wow I'm kinda speechless, your suggestions are absolutely wonderful! *notes them down*
thanks a lot for this very helpful and constructive review!!!
meh
it's an okay flash, you sure know how to draw the features of people, maybe you should use some of this inside of a flash movie. I thought this was a decent flash, perhaps some background music would help.
Xenosteel responds:
Yeah to be honest I only made this flash to practice drawing faces and hair, and it sure did improve my drawing skills greatly!
I wasn't planning for this to be a full feature since its still at version 0.44, but I might someday make it to the full version, which includes clothes, backgrounds, maybe pets, etc...
Thanks for the review! It helps
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Cut!
Xenosteel responds:
thanks ~.~
Weeee!
That was great! When you add more, put in the ability to have a body, and change it around and stuff! And a bunch of different poses! That'd be great! =D
Xenosteel responds:
hehe I'll be sure to take your note in mind :D I'm glad you enjoyed this early version ~.~ different body poses sounds like a lot of fun :D
thanks!