Among other things... Arwing: nailed.
That was a sweet, sweet model of the Arwing (especially the front view when Fox takes his shot). I dug the Fox model, too--like you say, there was some stiffiness, but I think the foundation's there, and Fox looks just great. Nice touches in the Arwing, btw--neat HUD ^^ . The music selections were choice, but there were some spotty issues (like the dead spot during the launch). If you do cap this off, I look forward to seeing the finished product.
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Nice tracing, but I didn't like the story is going to be, like, killing humans...
What tracing? Also, those aren’t necessarily humans. The only thing that suggests they’re humans is their body shape. They could be aliens. Who knows? At the time this was made, no enemy had been confirmed. I figured I could make some enemies that would kind of look like alien Special Forces, but their actual race would be ambiguous.
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starwulf are not in starfox 2, nor do homo sapientes live in the lylat system. Fox' gun doesn't fire bullets.
But great graphics.
I have to report to you that the replay button doesn't work, but who needs one haw haw.
If you would have read the intro, you would have seen that I already know the button doesn't work and those aren't homo sapiens. And where do you see any indication that Fox's gun fires bullets?
Its OK...
maybe you could of added more EXPLOSIONS. I mean, maybe some of the ships going up in flames and billions of pieces. is that much to ask for?
6/10: not too shabby
A nice rendition of star fox.
The animation and graphics were top notch, kinda of had that cell shaded look to it.
Though I guess it was just a trailer so I can't be too harsh on it, becuase really, nothing really interesting happened. It seemed it was dragged out a little too long in some parts just to give the illusion of it being lengthy. The best part was when fox wasn't in a machine, otherwords, on ground. The part were he rolled behind the crate and the part of him in the cockpit in the beginning were the only parts with the spiffy animation was at best. I guess the dog fight in space had it too, but seemed bland. Just show fox a little more so it just doesn't look like a unoriginal scfi epic.
Music seemed to fit with what you are you doing, but the japanese lryics were atrocious, but humourous in a unintentional way. Sound effects were sparse however.
3/5
Don't know if this was actually a trailer or the fact that it has 'mock' in it suggesting that it's just a flash cartoon of a actual trailer for the game? Did it come out already or was it suppose to be spring '05 instead of '04?
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There were some parts I stretched out, but that's also a matter of fixing beginner mistakes. A lot of people don't let things stay on screen for long enough, so I may have overdone it trying to avoid that.
Japanese lyrics? That was Iron Maiden. It's english. I picked that song because 1. Iron Maiden rocks, and 2. The song was "Aces High," about WWII fighter pilots.