It was ok, It can get better.
I almost enjoyed it. I mean it has potential. Take it in all kinds of directions. I'll watch the second one. Oh and try to progress the sceen more smoothly.
Reviews for "The Failures - Episode 1"
Laaaame
this is almost exactly like "Tomorrows Nobodies". however this can be turned around to be something pretty cool. try to get more original and it will be so much better
AntiClockClock responds:
The first episodes always have kind of a simple understanding who the characters are and what their personality is like, there will be random comedy in the near future.
umm
Well I hate to say it but...this looks an awful lot like Tomorrows Nobodies...I mean you even do basicaly the same thing in the opening credits they do and the whole topic seems to be quite similar. Also, when the guy walked in his legs didnt move..bouncing up and down is ok if you dont show their legs, but if you do, they should move...at least a little, how much more work could it be? And the second guy's head seems to misteriously change direction...You should show it moving or something and usualy when some ones talking they look at the person they're talking to. All things you could improve pretty easily...so do it next episode :)
AntiClockClock responds:
I will improve on things for sure, the funny thing is that I wasn't thinking of TN at all! I haven't seen those toons in such a long time and whats funny to me is that my character "Dave" looks similar to "David" from TN. Maybe that name just goes well with rocker guys. lol
you should be ashamed...
this is nothing more than a mere clone of tomorrows nobodies...and on top of all that it sucks....heh..what pisses me off, is when people dont put any effort into making their own ideas...
AntiClockClock responds:
Actually all of this was thought up myself, thanks though.
whys everyone gotta hate on foamy?
Really I am only reviewing this so i can say:
Why the fuck is everyone putting poser "heavy" metal songs at the end of their credits. Just seems to be the trend today. but ummm... stop it... cuz its dumb.
AntiClockClock responds:
Actually if you knew of modern-day UK/Underground band's or perhaps did some research you'd find that the credits music is by a mellow alternative band that just made a harder song. It went with the style so thats why I used it.