3/3
Nice buildup in the beginning. Seems like you were going for a very calm almost ambient track. A little repetitive... actually very repetitive...
This could make a decent track for a game, especially a puzzle game. However, you didn't really go for a loop and it would be up an ambition-deprived artist to make it loop well in their flash. Nothing really stands out in this one that I want to comment about, unfortunately. It's relatively thin, no bass or otherwise strong foundation for the mix. What you have is fairly clean sounding, no distortion, clipping, overcompression, etc.
I like the atmosphere you achieved, but it was ultimately boring and it doesn't exactly beg to be on an iPod.