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Reviews for "Machine Wars"

hmm well...

Lemme break it down....

Ok so a perfect movie would get a 100

Your drawings and animations both need a lot of work so I subtracted 25

The sounds were pretty bad so I subtracted another 15

Plot? Plot? there was none. You just had robot blobs fighting and then stuck in a cheap couple sentences at the end to try to explain the situation. This was my biggest peeve so I took away 40

This leaves you with a 20 which on my scale is about a 1.5 so I gave you the benefit of the doubt and rated it a 2/5.

Please fix these things before you decide to submit things here again.

Confused? Yes I am.

So...Your animation did not fit well with your backgrounds. Your music kept changing or something, i don't know, but either way i was confused and anoyed by it. Your story line...yeah...not good. I would ay if you took your background style from the beginning of the animation and mad your charecters match that and maybe skip the sound effects and settle on one song, you might have something halfway decent. One last suggestion, don't explain the point of your movie as being a combination of terminator and the matrix. I would rather be confused and make up my own story than have a shoddy allusion to the matrix forced down my throat.

u wasted my time!!

okay at first i thought this was going to be a giagantic war! At first it was cool cause the raptor came out and jumped then it started to be just crap! Crapass backrounds and it got boring nothing happend at all they just walked why the hell is there a raptor anyways! ill give you a 2 cause u tried!

Zzzz

I watched like 2 seconds of it...Im going watch some old movies...CharlieZero and stuff

14 year olds shouldnt make shitty flash movies

lame stolen tired ideas with shitty shitty music

using the beginning of 4 songs isnt awesome. its unbareable.
lame

dont
watch
this
crap

and for you, dont submit this crap either