I found it okay.
It needs work but I think everyone else has mentioned the sound, the jokes, the punchlines but its better than most things here!
Reviews for "Clean Up on Aisle Ninja"
Slightly Funny
I thought it was pretty funny. Yes there was no point, and yes the sound was a little weirded out, but other than that, it's a solid 6. I'll look forward to the next installment....sort of...ok,ok, I will.
Quite hilarious.
I liked it.
I do have some general recomendations that will help all flash movies everywhere, though. Listen well, grasshopper...
1. Level sound level - Why were some parts loud and others almost too quiet to hear?
2. Move the camera angle a bit more often - That was a long movie, especially to stay in pretty much one shot.
3. Slow humour is funny, but... - Try to pep it up for the most part. you don't have to throw them at us, but don't keep us waiting for every single punchline.
End the end, it's rusty, but still good.
-Favorite Bit-
Scotty: "Oh God, why?!"
God: "Because I... I-I I just hate you."
your potato looks GREAT today.
funny movie and good concept. Thats kinda how it was when I worked at the grocery store. LoL!
Nice job on the background. It REALLY gave the cartoon the feel of being in a grocery store/drug front/ terrorist base.
Keep up the good work!
Pretty good
I really enjoyed the show but you need to fix your sound problems. It's just so quit with the vocals and the sound the sound effects are so loud. That's the only thing I see you need to improve. I really liked the humor (did I detected some Dane Cook?) so please make more, but work on the sound.
thirstygerbil responds:
You did. Dane cook is the best. Thanks for the review. Very helpful.