Could be good, but just copied from others
I am not going to blam this to shit for a few reasons. One, I think you are pretty good at flash and the animation is decent. Two if you were to create something that was very original that you came up with I think you could be getting 5's. The problem with this is you took David Firth's original and disturbing cartoons and used them to your advantage. If you come up with something your own I think you could be a very good flash author