better than average
I liked the idea but i agree that the scenes were too long and the one thing that disappointed me was that the detailed images were not vectors, just images (not the highest quality images either) and the whole animation could be about half as long.
wtf vectors. I'm not really sure how you make those. In fact I don't care. I just drew them on paper, scanned them, colored them in photoshop and imported them in Flash. Then I did "trace bitmap". I'm not really sure why I did that though. I just did. Anyways.
AWESOME!!!
That was great, man. Nice animation, crazy music, spot-on timing, nice everything.
P.S. That dude looks exactly like Jinzo from Yu-Gi-Oh but without the long neck.
and without the... referencing to Yu-Gi-Ho. Wtf Mr.Freeze and now a Yu-Gi-Ho monster. Damn. He probably looks like a random Star Wars robot too, you might want to check those movies again.
More dynamism!
Crisp and clean are two very good and applicable descriptors for this work. Unfortunately, dynamic is not one. Cut to different visuals more quickly, don't give the viewer time to get bored with what they're seeing. Most of the stuff in the beginning could have its screen time cut in half to vastly improve the whole of the work. Viewers get the idea of what you're trying to convey pretty quickly; we don't need to see the robot arms going through a second repetition, or a second gleam of light going across Dude's goggles (which may or may not do nothing).
Study, ironically, some of the better Animutations; those by Andrew Kepple and Neil Cicierega are some of the best, and getting familiar with the way their works are timed, scenewise, will help your own timing as well.
Yeah only there's one little flaw in your plan. I don't have a plot. At all. I could always make twice as many scenes, but its not like there's a message to convey O.o Sure I can add some random robotic welding arms somewhere in there, or put another conveyer belt scene. Meh. But its probably a bit too slow. I wouldn't say twice as slow as it should be because the music isn't frantic really, but maybe a bit faster in some instances.
p.s. that dude with the goggles is my favorite thing in there. He so deserves 4 minutes on screen :o
Very nice
Wow Pox. . .
very good indeed.
I like how you made the guy, very nice..
5/5
Well thanks. I like only one thing really in all this, and its the picture I used in the preloader. I love how that turned out. In fact I should make t-shirts out of that or something.
Well done
Cool clip ever thought of doing other clips to different music..genres maybe just an idea that would be really interesting
well I have. Sortof. But next one, I will, only there's no telling if I'll ever get too. oh well. Unless I have to do this kinda stuff for College this year.