Ambitious Writing, Lacking Good Delivery
To best improve this series you guys should work on your voice acting. I think most of this stuff would be immensely funnier if you had better deliveries. I've watched a number of these cartoons from the series, and nothing has made me laugh out loud yet. Not to say that the writing isn't decent, it's well organized, but does lack that ZING I hear so much about. Seriously, if you work on the voice acing, the delivery, and the overall effect of everything that you've written you will do much better. If the comedy doesn't punch you in the gut, record it again, until it does.