Nice job, but a few suggestions.
I'm a fan of your other work, and you just helped me out on the AF with some midi keyboard stuff, but this song has a few things that could be fixed.
I like the melody, you always seem to have very warm and epic melodies. That area is good, but to me the song sounds like it is ridiculously over compressed. Not from a bit rate standpoint, but from a limiter standpoint. I either suggest turning down the gain and raising the threshold, or just using a plain old limiter instead of a compressor to do what you want. It's just very choppy. But if you still want your song to be this compressed, you could always turn up the decay so it's not as choppy.
Nice song though, I enjoyed it. Very nicely done melody, but it's too compressed.
-HLS