Graphics and sound good...
Graphics and sound good but mabey make more vilolence and some humor next time.
Reviews for "The Yoshi Pirates Trailer"
Ehhhhh!
This is ok, i mean good work on the drawings. but your water is really high i couldnt really see the boats at first and it wasn't too good for a trialer. i wouldnt wanna see it
look
this needs more effort...
but
you do have a potential,
i believe that if you do everything you can in order to make "Yoshi Pirates" itself the best you can, and put serius effort and animations and speech and details. it can easialy be frontpage.
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This is not the kind of stuff Newgrounds would like.
Trailers should be in the Alpha Section, whether you think it's a "good" or "bad" trailer.
It's got potential, but not enough to be a decent flash...atleast here in Newgrounds.
*Bets the author is going to re-submit this* >_>;
Needs Work.
You put in the effort and I'm not going to bad mouth you on that. But you need to clean up the character drawings a lot. This should be to hard for you however, because by the looks of it you can in fact draw. You may not be used to drawing in flash, it takes time. You get it though. As far as your skill in the program goes, you've got. Maybe a little honing, but you're obviously capable of using Flash. And as far as sound, your soundtrack, to be honest, annoyed the ever living shit out of me. But this is something that is a personal thing that only hindering your final product for me and maybe others who feel the same way. Decent work. Keep it up and do your best.