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Reviews for "Locust Fo' Evah"

At first I was like

"El oh el, what kind of face is THAT? What's that she's doing with her hand? Some sort of Spider-man thing, I-"

"Oh. ..... OOOOOoooh. I get it."

Mad me laugh.

MindChamber responds:

yah youre right, doesnt look like shes touching herself enough,
my foreshortening sucks :/

very nice effects

So this was something neat and has a very good look to it, i really was attracted to how you used some effects like with the "BLURRING" out the backround as to keep more focus on the character, and there with the character very sharp and fresh looking nice lines and great color tones, the "PINK" horn on her head seems like it could have had more of a glow or shine to it though, This was a pretty good character design and drawing, maybe adding some shine to the metal would also help more of a sparkly type of shine, The "FONT/TEXT" you had up there at top was cool but maybe something more fancy would sufice, these are just some little details that could bringout the drawing abit more focus, anyways nice work indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was pretty decent i did suggest a few ideas that can make it somewhat more unique in a way so hope you consider some of the tips suggested, The pink like horn could use some shine too it, The font could have a more fancy look, And more shine on the metal, some spraklies here and there would be a great addition, just a few ideas to think about.

MindChamber responds:

i totally agree! and thanks for the tips!