Uum..
Well.. You said that you have to have a certain sense of humor to enjoy it. I've got that sense of humor.. Pretty funny :P
Reviews for "Birds-"
ok yah it was well animated
But it really was just stupid. BY THE WAY. I KNOW I'VE SEEN THIS SOMEWHERE BEFORE! Are you gonna tell me where or am I going to have to blow the wistle on stolen work.
cribble responds:
I submitted it before, but the file size was stupid, it was like 1Mb, so it deserved the blam. I sorted out the file size and resubmitted it.
Good.
Your flashes are strange, entertaining, and often original. This one is short, but I find it cute, and at the same time full of meaning.
Nice use of shape tweens
Your shape tweens look a lot better than some of pepole's frame by frame.
Your animation is smooth but you might want to try to experment with all asspects of flash. tweens, frame by frame, ect.
You done a nice third attempt but it's at average level try to focus more time on a short that's thought out and planned.
I know this review may seem harsh but i'am trying to help you out with some advice. Try again and make a flash with more movement.
Way too go on mastering shape tweens on your third submission.
cribble responds:
Don't worry about being harsh, because you've made constuctive comments. I am still, and probably always, experimenting with different styles. Frame by Frame was done it my last animation "dream Log" which was made with theTAB and Swift3D (compiled in flash). This was another software experiment made with MoHo, and its autoshape tweens... and also working at a higher frame rate (25fps). The flash export still wasn't up to scratch (Moho5 Beta1) so i had to do alot of manual work in Flash. (like filling colours and tweenings). Thanks for your constructive thoughts.
just a beginning
that seemed like it was just a beginning.