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Reviews for "LightShadow (SampleFight)"

hmm...quite nice...

Quite nice...but the visual are not clear...and the camera angle are not very good...but its still good because i'm a 3d lover =p

nice animation

But Matrix-style bullet time is SO not cool anymore. Try to vary medium and tights shots instead of using the same "third person" view all the way through.

Good, but it's not a story...

The graphic is good, just the sound, not enough on that...

StealthNice responds:

We put the intro out.. did you check that out yet..? Oh.. plus we didt even finish the story yet... his was just to show you guys whats comming.. a sample ;)

Not terrible...

But I think you should be putting this on IFILM or Atomfilms, so you don't have to enter it as a Flash file.

Flash files aren't great for presenting AVIs in clear format, and this piece shouldn't have to suffer visually because of the limitations of Flash.

All the other criticisms (rough/jerky animation, soso coreography, too many matrix effects) are valid.

So I think you should go back to the drawing board, flesh out what kind of scenario you want (its just 2 random guys fighting for no reason at the moment), and once you have a rough cut (good editing and pacing for the story) THEN go for a Longer version.

Just my 2 cents...

StealthNice responds:

Yea.. but the intro already came out.. and we explained that this entry was just a SAMPLE :) Not supposed to have a plot or plan.. just 2 random guys fighting.. there real characters that will be in the real episodes. but right now we just wanted to show some of tha capabilities.. It will definaley be more fine tuned next time...

:(

kinda weak bro.
kinda really weak.