Neat Idea
Wonderful idea, the opening had me laughing. The story itself wasn't very funny, but if you play with the idea a bit and perhaps parody other biblical characters along the "I Love Lucy," theme, this could be a neat series. Keep at it.
Reviews for "A Short"
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drawings are good, but for the rest I don't like it
You love jesus?.........GAY!
Jesus did't exist religion is dead yada yada hail satan etc etc....
Hmm... I could see this going somewhere
But it does need a lot of work. I love that music, they're almost my favorites. But the graphics (people) and the jokes need work. Maybe if you put a bit more time on the actual show, but whatever.
Overall, I kinda liked this. Was pretty short, and not so funny, but do make more.
brave but needs work
it is very slow paced and could use some editing, could be tightened up...the joke is mildly funny but older than dirt....... but because you used the song from the arrogant worms i give it a six....
(note that i deliberatly am not disscussing the whole religious facet of this cartoon)