*Trying not to be a bad person* >n<
Ok, this is probably going to come out wrong, but here we go;
This is an interesting take on Chaoz Fantasy, and definatly more 'Rave-able' than the original, but somehow the sheere spine-tingling air to Paragon's doesn't come out in this for me. Yes, I realise you have an Artist/Writers block, and comig up with anything can be pure torture (I know how that feels :'( ). I just gotta say, the original is better this time.