wow...
well I can tell this is from Alivin and the Chipmunks however it's still good.
Reviews for "Bob: Patriotic Chipmonk"
yamijoku responds:
actually, it's Lee Greenwood, I just used some audio software I had to modify the audio
((( IT WAS OK )))
It was ok, but you really needed more like alot more animation the song was funny and cute but you cant just go with only that the ending was ok, but all in all you need more effort for this...
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total shit
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Ehhh, needs more
I like the whole ChipmUnks concept, but this needs way more content. Even something as simple as a few close ups or difference chipmunks would really help. It's an okay idea, but it just looks like not a whole lot of work went into it. Especially with the lip sync and all.
Yeah, more content
There's really nothing to hold the audience's attention throughout this. Essentially we're watching a photograph of a chipmunk with a little blinking white square.
Some things I'd reccomend: 1) occasionally horizontally flip the photograph every once in a while to make it look like the chipmunk's turned to the left or to the right. 2) Cut out the head or one of its feet or something and move it to add a little character, maybe in time with the beat... it looks cheezy and unrealistic but it's a pretty accepted technique in animations nowadays. 3) Switch to scenes of other things throughout the song... a little like you did in the second verse, but a lot more so. They don't necessarily need to be related to what the lyrics are talking about at that exact instant, though I'd assume they'd be some kind of patriotic looking locations. Featuring the chipmunk singing in other locations could be cool too. 4) Have some closeups of the chipmunk, vary its size a little bit to make it look like its coming closer or moving farther away (or the camera is zooming in or out). 5) Make the mouth sync better with the song. On the long notes you held it open, that was good, but on every other part it was blinking on and off pretty much completely out of sync.