Much better, man.
Hey, even though I don't quite understand what you're saying all of the time on this one(I think you may want to slow down your original voice just a bit), it was much better than the others you've made. I also liked your "Foamy's original voice" part, even diehard fans of Foamy probably got a kick out of that...
Also, Rick James isn't there. Good.
Yeah, your script writing may need some refinement (maybe have it read over by some older people before putting it to work), but your acting is much better, more exaggerated, and more true to Foamy.
Nice progress, man.