Reviews for Triumph^

[Zyrotech]

nice!

i like to do this thing called a soul description. i listen to a song and describe a scene that comes to me when i here the song... here it is:

at the AWESOME intro i think of a dark wasteland with a dead tree... its all gray and black... then at 0:33 you see a hand come out of a crater... it pulls up the rest of its body revealing a man... hes scratched and hurt but he manages to get up. the he walks over TRIUMPHANTLY and picks up a sword stuck on the ground and rests it on his shoulder... btw the man is like a black stick figure... he really doesnt have a face or clothes you know?

well thats it! i hope you liked it and btw this is pretty cool so 5/5

pyrobunny9 responds:

hmm that's an interesting story. What's with the stick figure though, lol.

Thankyou very much for 10/10. I never would have imagined Someone would give me a 10.

[Phyrnna]

Nice.

It's a little creepy sounding at first, but after 0:31, that's when it really sounds good. I suppose putting it into the dance category may not be the right choice for this type of song. Nonetheless, well done.

-HFX ^_^

pyrobunny9 responds:

Yeah, I dont really know why I put it in dance. It's kinda like a dance-classical song, but leaning more towards classical.

[M1K3-B]

hmm

needs more cowbell. other than that not bad

pyrobunny9 responds:

michael...

[racknam12345]

Not Bad

Yo dude, if ppl think ur transitions aren't very good, then im scared to see wat ppl say about mine. I mean, the transitions arent perfect, but they're pretty good. I would call this classical, either.

[Darren-M]

it was not unpleasent

well i will tell you one thing, dont ever worry about what people think of the intro, the intro sets the mood, so good job with that. your drums could have used a litle more reverb and i think you would have achieved the exact emotion you were going for, your lead that comes in around 50 needs to be a little softer and not so abrupt when it is introduced, it needs to sound more like a pad. a pad can be a gentle synth sound used for filling up the background so it makes the song sound more full and thy can create atmosphere

i actually really liked the piano part you made for this, thats good stuff, and the bass at the beginning was actually pretty cool.

keep working, you have a great start!

pyrobunny9 responds:

Ok, I'll try to work on those drums for my next song. Like I said i'm still new.

Yeah, I sorta regret adding that little thing around 50. It's really out of place. Unfortunately I can't change it because I was uing the FL demo and I lost the file for it :l

Thankyou very much for an in depth review. I appreciate it.