Reviews for Kayo Mata [ I ]

[thejiggajeff]

Good work... just needs some refinement.

First off, great job. Stylistically, it's golden, visually it's pretty good; more detail would be nice. Soundtrack was okay too.

Problems arose from the moment I read your description. 'Ninja's' is posessive, where I'm pretty sure that you meant for it to be plural. There's no apostrophe in "ninjas", when you're talking about more than one ninja. It's just "ninjas".

Why is this important? It hurts your credibility from the get-go. People, without seeing the flash, immediately take you for some 8-year-old if you mess something like that up.

Also, the voices were not well done... especially the quality of the voices... bad microphone?

There's a certain sophistication that comes with making something virtually flawless. People have no time to worry about mistakes or problems when something's great; they just concentrate on what you're doing, the feelings and experience are awesome when there isn't some glaring problem in the foreground.

This is too good not to be flawless, man! Good luck on Ch. 2!

subcultured responds:

sorry, wrote that kinda fast. i'm sleepy. ill fix it right now.

[jizzlepoppacrack]

pretty good

this movie is pretty good it has good grafix , sound , plot , and style the only problem was it was too short make another

[MethoD-X]

Its good..

I enjoyed it. However you need to try to make the animation a little more realistic since I can tell its a semi-realistic story you're trying to tell. Good things aren't rushed. So just take your time and smooth things and movements out. Just look at other movies for examples, or some animes, and try to mimic (not copy) the way they do things.

Other than that it looks very promising and I'm looking forward to it.

[Haikyousha]

little this, little that

Pretty good potential, coming from somebody who can respect Ghost in the Shell for what it was. You should have made the references to Ghost in the Shell more clear, since the inspiration comes from a likely obvious source.

[otakunorth]

rip

whatta ghost in the shell rip off even the music and when the guy jumped off the building :p
i still gave this a 3 cuz u did a good job but it was just 2 short

subcultured responds:

i liked ghost in the shell, but its not a real rip off. first of all its a guy jumping off with wings off a building. in gis its a girl jumping off using an invisible rope and she turns invinsible. I could say GIS is a rip off of diehard when he jumped off the building with a rope. I actually like the GIS music its very serene compared to most anime music. I'm glad you like it though. ^_^