Its good..
I enjoyed it. However you need to try to make the animation a little more realistic since I can tell its a semi-realistic story you're trying to tell. Good things aren't rushed. So just take your time and smooth things and movements out. Just look at other movies for examples, or some animes, and try to mimic (not copy) the way they do things.
Other than that it looks very promising and I'm looking forward to it.