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ok...boring...
Reviews for "Mr. White"
Not bad
1. It needs to be bit longer.
2. It needs sound aswell.
3. Get a topic or something and run with that.
Good luck with your next flash.
Don't be discouraged by my numbers...
I am only being fair, however your one of the first people who made a flash movie, their first one, that I protected...be proud of yourself. Keep up at it and you will be very good.
Couple things....
1.Now come up with something more interesting. As good a job as you did, it was a boring. :)
2.Longer...you've got some skill so use it your best ability, once you've come up with an idea, do it so people will have to watch it for a while.
3.Have fun :)
Very nice!
That was awsome for a first flash. It looks like you actually put some work into it rather than some of these idiots that post somthing up after working with flash for 5 minutes. Nice Job
nice
i have 1thing 2 say....GOOD JOB
4 ur 1st flash tht was pretty good keep it up