I liked the cartoons
that was good for your first animation - you seem to be pretty natural at drawing in flash... my only suggestion would be to work on the plot/joke... it didn't really make a lot of sense...
...and personally I'm not a fan of the computer generated voices (but then again a lot of people are so whatever)
...good job though - I liked it!
Better Than Most Beginners
This piece really isn't too shabby. You animate well with Flash and your artwork is slick and pleasing to the eye.
Next time, be sure to add a background. It will give your cartoon more depth and a more professional look. Also, your sound quality is a bit hammered. Try increasing the bit rate and / or the kHz to make it sound clearer.
Overall, I think you did a pretty good job. I look forward to watching you improve. Best of luck!
What you've said sums up what everone else has pretty much said. Thank you all for the encouragment and helpful tips. I've messed with photoshop forever, I guess I just carried it over to flash.
lol
not too bad dude. lol that gave me a morning laugh. the only thing missing is a background and that its short. not really a problem though. lol i think im gonna watch this again
That was awsome! :D
Yeah, it was!
Not bad
Not bad for a first time flash, but next time you should add subtitles, cuy one couldn't understand all of the dialog. And make it longer! ;D (Yeah, I know, you mentioned it being short)