hmm
Now i bet you know one hundred times that people are complaining about how its from garage band. So i will be the minority and review how you actually structured your song....deal?
In every song i always look for a good intro. Yours goes straight into a repetitive guitar tune. There really isn't any structure, no chorus, no verse, just blargh. Its all random and repetitive, especially how there isn't much of a variation in instruments either like the guy said below me, or so i think he did...
I don't know garageband very well but it seems like it limits you from actually making a well structured song.