A Long Song Indeed
I like how you told a story and the chords are nice n stuff, though it doesn't really feel like it's going anywhere. The vocoder melody didn't really engage me either (though that's maybe just the robot being robotic, heh).
Lastly in the singing bit, it goes way out of tune in places!
It's either a love it or hate it song. Judging by the drastic rise and fall in ratings over the last day, I'd say it leans more towards hate. But I guess I'm right there too! I really don't think this is my best song, not even close. You should check out some of my other songs, like Land Locked, or Torngia!
FRONT PAGE!
Epic! XD
Shizzle!
NICE
I can't beleave it almost made me cry
Me too, man. Me too...
OMG NICE
OMG Nice job your others are nice too
XD nice plot... ROBOT
It means alot to me that you took time to not only listen to this song, and comment on it, but took the time to listen to my other songs too. I really appreciate it. I came to newgrounds to get feedback after no one ever says anything on myspace. Thanks again, man!
Nice :)
That was kinda good man, there are parts of the song that could use some work and by that I mean some sounds sound a bit too distorted especially the guitar part and they prevent me to crank up the volume (and I have a good amplifier)
PROS:
I like the basic melody of the song, the guitar solo is cool, the song has a good tempo, the lyrics are nice and sound good with a vocoder and it's nice to listen to it in a loop
CONS:
You have a nice voice but the part without the vocoder could have used more rehearsing, and as I said the guitar is cool, but a bit too distorted.
OVERALL:
It's not that bad, it's quite good actually (the song was in a loop the whole time while I was writing this, and I think that says allot ;-) 5/5 10/10 ...gave you a high score because I suppose you also make solo projects like me...not the best thing on Newgrounds by all means, but the song shows that you have good talent and time will only show improvement, I'm sure of it.
Thanks for such a great review! It's always so refreshing to hear input in a sincere way. I know the EQing on the song is a little off, but it always seems by the time I finish a song, and am about to wrap it up (with eqing and recording vocals) I'm usually so tired of hearing the song that I tend to half ass it. Guess you caught me! Once again, thank you so much for your review, and I'll be sure to keep on writing!