A good first try
This was very good for a first try, let my give you some constructive criticism here....
-Don't use gradients so often, it's an obvoius sign of newbish-ness.
-Try typing your text on a plain white or transparent bubble, the way you did it hurt my,(and most likely others') eyes.
-Just keep practicing man.
All in all a good job.
thanks i'll do what you said about the bubbles in my next flash, i too have noticed it was really hard to read, thanks for the constructive criticism
Not bad, really good for a first.
I actually found this entertaining..considering it's your first, it's very good. All you have to do is fix the text and graphics. Most of all the text. But the main reason this was entertaining was the sounds, so you got that down right.
thanks!! yep some people have told me that text was hard to read, i'll work on that,thanx 4 request
origninal and ok
it ok but i think you could of done better. bit too short. but im just glad that you didnt rip off the worm. you gonna do more or not?DONT READ THIS BECAUSE IM JUST WRITING USELESS STUFF SO IT CAN BE long enough to put up.
Kind lame...
would've been funnier if Falcon just went 600 mph right at the beginning. Luigi cant beat that.
GET IT REAL
WTF MOTORCYCLE WINS OF A F-ZERO MACHINE
A MOTORCYCLE CAN REACH OVER 150 KM/H
AN F-ZERO MACHINE RACES AT LEAST 1000 KM/H
SO WTF MOTORCYCLE WINS
ONLY BY A STUPID BANANA
I CAN ALSO TELL YA THAT A F-ZERO MACHINE FLOATS!!! >=(
SO IT EVEN CANNOT SLIPPED BY A BANANA
I WANT MORE REALITY AND LET THE NEXT TIME AN F-ZERO MACHINE WINS! OKAY? GET IT REAL
floating cars that go over 1000 km/h?? and you're blaming ME for lack of reality? everyone thought that the blue falcon would win and... SURPRISE! luigi won hahaha!!! you didnt expect that huh?? THX 4 review!