All right here what I think.
So, this is the second song I've listened to, and you might wonder, if I will be, in your own words, so harsh, but you will be happy to hear the answer is no. I find this song very good enchanting int he beginning leading into something eskew a pathway to some corner of my mind I cannot reach within my woken conciousness. So, the transition is good, the sounds are original. so for this song, and not becuse of your fan who tried to complain to me, I reward this piece with a nine out of ten becaus perfection is in reach, but something seems missing.
Good luck in future song creations. I'll be watching. Edge kun.