I gave you a 2 in Humor for "2ry harder!"
Actually, the 2 in Humor was for the transition from hardcore to soft music. I actually laughed at that part! The rest was low quality, disturbing, and overall annoying. You have a slight comical intuition, I can tell from the way you screenplayed that (whether actually plotted out on paper or in thought...). Anyway, try harder, and hardcore torture/rape doesn't go well with slightly random/misplaced humor.
wow, thanx for the humor points
I don't see anythin' in this crap!
Jezusssss! I'd better watch The Telebubbies. I mean, even the types of killing were lame...
yeah, telebubbies? are great, they have something for everyone, characters who are high all the time, a crazy ass sun, n they even have a gay one, n-e-ways, wut would be a non-lame way to kill someone?
It was really explicit....
.....but if that's your taste in flash movie genres, it was good then. Personally, I'm not very fond with flash movies like this, but that doesn't mean it wasn't good.
Good job with setting the music according to the scene (I don't know, just gave it something extra I guess).
yeah, the music was the best part, n easyest, heh
Personally...
I would have fucked most of those chicks. My only complaint is could you at least have sex with one of the chicks!? Oh well, good effort!
in my dreams of sex, i usualy dont torture my ladies,n-e-ways im not talented enough to draw porn yet, it woulda looked pretty stupid if i tried, thanx for deh review
Jesus christ...
Are you fucking distrubed? What were you thinking when you made this or even considering it to sumbit to NG?
Fucking sadisticly disturbed fuck...
Jesus Christ loves all his little children of the world, disturbed or not, n disturbed is a great band