Damn
Reviews for "Recess is Over (Pico's School)"
Treeho responds:
Damn
I spent a lot of time thinking on how to best word this, because I want to tell you some things I think can be improved: The perspective on the chairs compared to the rest of the room looks a bit off, like they're leaning too far forward; the size of the chair in the bottom left is also way too tiny, which is especially noticeable when you compare it to the size of Pico and his desk. The room might also look a bit less empty and it would make sense if there were a few other desks scattered around besides Pico's, considering it's a classroom. The blood version's blood also doesn't look quite vibrant enough to easily stick out; it sort of blends in with the rest of the room. I personally didn't immediately realize that it was there, and that could be the reason why you found the paint version more pleasing. I love the look of the brush you used, although when zooming in a few parts look rough, like Pico's shoes. Overall still a really great piece with room for improvement, you definitely nailed the heavy composition you were going for! And this WOULD look awesome as a poster. :)
Treeho responds:
Thank you for the feedback! Funny enough, I also saw all of these mistakes when I decided to wrap everything up LMAO. Especially the "bare classroom" comment. The original sketch had flipped over tables, unfortunately I didn't take the time to polish everything. Again, thank you for your constructive criticism!
this looks awesome! but prolly not awesome to be in
Treeho responds:
as much as this looks cool, I also don't want to be in his situation LMAO
Poor kid...
i knew that he have horns