It was alright
It was ok, not the greatest, this guy can probably come up with some crazy funny shit once he works with Flash a little more. More sound!!! lol
Reviews for "DayDream.."
well
ur off to a good start just make one with sounds and also learn how to put in a keyframe thst makes the movie end so it doesnt keep looping. some tutorials from flashkit will help :P
PRETTY GOOD....
u should make it longer and funny you are really good at cartooning make more
you have potential!
you need a soundtrack... some playful music would suit that one. and how about some sound effects?
your animation skills are pretty cool, this looks like it was frame-by-frame too, good works on the graphics.
you should also include a preloader at the start of your flash. an end screen with a replay button, and perhaps some contact detials (email, website url etc) would be recommended.
I was very WTF-ed by the story though O_o which doesn't mean it's bad, heheh
very nice :)
good style, an smooth animation, with extra length and sound it would b v good :D