Nice! Glad to see this turned into a full song. :)
Hey man! Great to see this turned into a full song. :) Overall, I really liked it.
If you'd be willing to take a little feedback/criticism, I have a few thoughts:
- First off, that's pretty impressive for whipping this up in just an hour; I love those moments when you're really inspired and totally in the zone and can just blast stuff out! :P
- I like the arp you added at the beginning, and feel like you should wait to use it until later on. Perhaps I just enjoyed the original clip before without the arp, but I feel that it should come later in the song...which leads me to my next point!
- In the middle, I think you could add a bit more. I know you did whip this out pretty quickly, and I feel you could have done a little bit more to change things up in the second half (it currently feels like you just copy and pasted the first half so it just loops twice). If you added in the arp into the second part, it would add a little more variety, and add to the feeling of 'building up' or 'layering'.
- Additionally on that note, it'd be cool to see the second-half's melody changed up slightly. If you gave the melody a more 'up' feeling by adding some higher notes and/or just changing it slightly in general, it would give a little more finality to the song, as well as variety to the second half. :)
Hope my notes/ideas make sense (I'm kinda tired, so my thoughts may be a bit disjointed currently). :P
Again, great job, especially for whipping that out in only an hour! :D
- Itsa