so so
would have been better if it was longer
Reviews for "Class day out"
Excellent
I wanted it to last a bit longer. Just wondering will there be a second episode to your " Class day out short". The music was fun, I like teh preloader very much and teh animation was excellent. You lost a point due to it being a bit short.
ReporterClock responds:
Lol, nah, its a preety old animation. And for some reason I jsut noticed all my music videos are plotless o_o
holy shit
did you submit this befor cause i just got a major moment of deja vou. anyway, graphics were ok, but it was too short and pointless. nice try, but make em longer.
ReporterClock responds:
LOL! You probably saw it on my Deviantart account, "Neotomi"
good, but lacking something... a plot perhaps?
the presentaion in the is flash is excellent. The art is very well drawn, and the music creats a fun feeling. It's also a quick loader which is cool.
However, the whole flash feels like an intro to something - there's not really any interesting story here. There needs to be a bit of dialog, some jokes and stuff, a bit of conflict, that kind of thing.
You know, like the kind of stuff that would actually happen n a class day out :)
I think if you wrote a good plot and presented as well you did here, yu'll be on to a winner.
ReporterClock responds:
Lol, thanks for the constructive critisism, I'll keep that in mind =)
very classic clock esque
i liked it i thought it was reminisent of the classic clock movies being short having odd character and being pointless for the point of being pointless
ReporterClock responds:
This wasn't even a clock movie, it was just an animation I did cos I wanted to see what I cna do with flash, I liked making animations about my class, and I wanted to make an amusement park video clip for quite a while